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Re: a Standing Rebirth
when you were born you never crawled. you never walked you never ran you simply stood and allowed the river of time to flow around you. never moving, never acting ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: The Monotone Dagger | Cutting Edge of the Mind
uuuughhh.....sure but I write like this on purpose, almost by nature... I just got tired of people makin' a big sh*t out of it.
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Monotone Dagger | Cutting Edge of the Mind
I like how you use the term "real talk" and based a piece around it. I have to say that I like the concept but the delivery was really off. ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Luau Lane
well then... it's a very "chillaxed" kind of narrative. the narrator didn't seem to be suffer even though she/he had to work in order to fulfill his/her new home... I ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
:? ...uhhh cool... the main a happy psycho bi-otch........................ :) .................... :D ........ ................ :twisted: ..........CAN"T .............STOP ........SMILING!!!!!!
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man
:? any questions? as to my reasoning in writing this
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Got his butt kicked in class
8) you got your ass kicked in class? damn... but that's all changed now because you can write condescending literauture about your enemies good luck with revenge!!! :twisted:
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Naruto Shippuden
Killer B!!! is my favorite character!!! he's only appeared in the manga so far.. he's the 8-tailed jinkuraki he's the very first rapping ninja...he's not very good at rapping but ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Obsidian Gats & Cheshire Lilies
this is a funky Jazz epic tellin' a fantasy gangsta story (please read the whole thing) Obsidian Gatz & Cheshire Lilies (this is a Jazzy epic rap , straight outa ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man
out in the center of existence slept the all of everything, the Alpha Omega Alpha GOD upon his awakening The universe exploded into existence and activity in one BIG BANG. ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man
(yo, if you're atheist please don't shoot me yo if you're religious please don't burn me yo if you're bored please go read something else yo if you're interested please ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: If Life Gave You...
questions,questions,questions this is the best way to get answers about oneself and and the surrounding individuals what has life ever given me? what has life ver given you you? my ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: My Beautiful Requiem
yet another perspective for me to inspect this is me looking in on a poem of looking without from within oneself being within ones "reqium" this is obviously the story ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Slurring Between Closed Jaws
and emotionallybroken tale told from the body constructed of the fragments from broken perspectives these are indeed the dying moments of a number of individuals. it could only have been ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: A Secret Place
I really liked this it rhymed and it told a good enough story however you left out way too much story who is chasing the two? why are the too ...
Jan 25, 2009
