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  • Lyric Poetry Re: a Standing Rebirth

    when you were born you never crawled. you never walked you never ran you simply stood and allowed the river of time to flow around you. never moving, never acting ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Monotone Dagger | Cutting Edge of the Mind

    uuuughhh.....sure but I write like this on purpose, almost by nature... I just got tired of people makin' a big sh*t out of it.

    Jan 31, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Monotone Dagger | Cutting Edge of the Mind

    I like how you use the term "real talk" and based a piece around it. I have to say that I like the concept but the delivery was really off. ...

    Jan 31, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Luau Lane

    well then... it's a very "chillaxed" kind of narrative. the narrator didn't seem to be suffer even though she/he had to work in order to fulfill his/her new home... I ...

    Jan 31, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Happy

    :? ...uhhh cool... the main a happy psycho bi-otch........................ :) .................... :D ........ ................ :twisted: ..........CAN"T .............STOP ........SMILING!!!!!!

    Jan 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man

    :? any questions? as to my reasoning in writing this

    Jan 28, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Got his butt kicked in class

    8) you got your ass kicked in class? damn... but that's all changed now because you can write condescending literauture about your enemies good luck with revenge!!! :twisted:

    Jan 28, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Naruto Shippuden

    Killer B!!! is my favorite character!!! he's only appeared in the manga so far.. he's the 8-tailed jinkuraki he's the very first rapping ninja...he's not very good at rapping but ...

    Jan 28, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Obsidian Gats & Cheshire Lilies

    this is a funky Jazz epic tellin' a fantasy gangsta story (please read the whole thing) Obsidian Gatz & Cheshire Lilies (this is a Jazzy epic rap , straight outa ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man

    out in the center of existence slept the all of everything, the Alpha Omega Alpha GOD upon his awakening The universe exploded into existence and activity in one BIG BANG. ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man

    (yo, if you're atheist please don't shoot me yo if you're religious please don't burn me yo if you're bored please go read something else yo if you're interested please ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If Life Gave You...

    questions,questions,questions this is the best way to get answers about oneself and and the surrounding individuals what has life ever given me? what has life ver given you you? my ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Beautiful Requiem

    yet another perspective for me to inspect this is me looking in on a poem of looking without from within oneself being within ones "reqium" this is obviously the story ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Slurring Between Closed Jaws

    and emotionallybroken tale told from the body constructed of the fragments from broken perspectives these are indeed the dying moments of a number of individuals. it could only have been ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Secret Place

    I really liked this it rhymed and it told a good enough story however you left out way too much story who is chasing the two? why are the too ...

    Jan 25, 2009


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